I don't know how to improve my english,sometimes I am lost,should I speak english just like I write?I think people will feel strange,coz spoken english is different from writing,sometimes I feel so ironic,I can write english but I can't speak,so stupid,maybe I can write a good article,but if you change it,I mean you let me talk some topics, I never can say one word to express my view,so ironc,but anyway,if I have free time,I will find some topics and write it.
Topic:
Some educational systems emphasize the development of students' capacity for reasoning and logical thinking, but students would benefit more from an education that also taught them to explore their own emotions
my writing:
In modern times, the educational role is becoming more and more significant. The education can contribute to the development of individual’s future, even a nation. So many people pay more attentions to the educational development. How should the educational systems foster students’ capacity? Different people have their own viewpoints. Some people think that the educational systems should emphasize the development of students’ capacity for reasoning and logical thinking. I concede that this way to develop the students’ capacity is out of question. However, blindly pursuing this kind of the students’ ability will disadvantage the integrative development of students. As far as I concerned, the accurate way is that educational systems emphasize the development of students’ capacity for reasoning and logical thinking and at the same time, also do not overlook teach the students explore their own emotions.
It is momentous for students to have the ability for reasoning and logical thinking, especially to us who live in modern times. Along with the forward development of science and technology, students need master more and more advanced knowledge. So the capacity for reasoning and logical thinking become more and more significant. To every student, this ability is indispensable. Reasoning and logical thinking is the advantageous instrument to assist students comprehending the complicated knowledge fully. we recognize clearly that grasping the more knowledge will lay the foundation of our future success. Reasoning and logical thinking is the precondition to grasp knowledge much more. So educational systems should not neglect this aspect .
Simply put, without reasoning and logical thinking, we will only find the superficial appearances and be not able to understand the essences hided underside of many things.
On the other hand, emphasizing to develop the capacity for reasoning and logical thinking does not mean that we can overlook to teach students to explore their own emotions that students are still benefit from it. People’ emotions always improve, even strengthen, our own development because it can adjust our states on time and make us work or study with the better mood. In addition, exploring students’ emotions also make them intercourse with other much more and accelerate the harmonious relations between the different persons. As we know well, our society is full of the corporation and people always are connected with others more or less. The relations among persons become more and more important. So it is necessary for students to learn communicate each other. Emotions can help us to achieve those. Try to imagine, if one only grasp much knowledge, however, he does not know how communicate or corporate with others. As a result, he will accomplish nothing.
To sum up, I consider that reasoning and logical thinking and teaching the students to exploring their owe emotions are equal significant role for us. Without the capacity for reasoning and logical thinking, we cannot recognize and understand absolutely many things such as the law of nature. Without exploring the emotions, we cannot exert fully our potential ability. So they are equally important